Good for You (Bear and Rabbit comedy short - 45 sec.)

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:48 pm

Here is my short (very tiny but completed). Just in case if someone doesn't know russian (

) here is the translation:

Bear: Rabbit, does your shit ever stuck to your fur?
Rabbit: Nope.
Bear: Good for you...

And here is the short:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w4-RLwKGHFo

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:03 pm

Cool animation.

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:36 pm

Thanks, any suggestions? weak sides?

Joppa · Post by **Joppa** » Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:25 pm

hehe, cool. i like the scene and the characters. realy nice.

Maybe a sideangel on the rabbit when he jumps in. and the dialog is a bit low.

do you have more animations?

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:29 am

what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?

J. Baker · Post by **J. Baker** » Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:36 pm

That was hilarious! I gave it 5 stars.

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:06 pm

lumarama wrote:what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?

-- maybe he means "side angle"?

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:22 pm

jahnocli wrote:
lumarama wrote:what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?
-- maybe he means "side angle"?

Yes, indeed- that makes sense - and thanks for advice

rogermate · Post by **rogermate** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:37 am

How about a short feature about the former Circus bear, who when let free still paced back and forth in the same dimensions as his cage. So they shot him.

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:02 am

rogermate wrote:How about a short feature about the former Circus bear, who when let free still paced back and forth in the same dimensions as his cage. So they shot him.

I remember there was a guy on the forum who is making cruel series about 3 bears - I guess this would be good scenario for him

)

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:24 pm

Ha ha, an oldie but goodie. Hey, btw your 3d animation is sharp.

lumarama · Post by **lumarama** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:59 pm

neeters_guy wrote:Ha ha, an oldie but goodie. Hey, btw your 3d animation is sharp.

Thanks, you mean it is old joke in English part of the Internet too? Very interesting I thought it is purely Russian joke. I mean my animation is based on well known Russian joke. Could you give a link to its English version?

Regarding 3d. I like 2d now... it has certain limitations, but I don't think it is very important if you have good story... Unfortunately I don't have very good story yet

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:25 pm

lumarama wrote:Very interesting I thought it is purely Russian joke. I mean my animation is based on well known Russian joke.

I actually heard this joke from a coworker back in the eighties. He told it really well (you know, with physical comedy), which is why I still remember it today. I wasn't aware of its Russian origins however. I see on the internet that the rabbit represents the workers and the bear is...well, now it has a whole new level of meaning.