california roll

bartender · Post by **bartender** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 6:40 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lsSr7etSV9U

a little bit from gunfight scene i am animating

tonym · Post by **tonym** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 3:47 pm

Whoa! I like that.

One thing I might change is the treatment of the camera. That slow pan is not exciting. I'd probably jerk the camera around a bit, to convey excitement, and zoom the camera in on the guy when he reloads. Then track him as he jumps and rolls. Or something.

Hmm. Because the character animation is so good, though, I bet the slow panning of the camera is just a temporary thing and you intend the final product to have better camera work. Am I right?

Anyhow, great work! Thanks for posting.

bartender · Post by **bartender** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:42 pm

Thanks for the input! Ya the final renders most likely will be shaky cam, with some tight shots to cut in- I'll post more of this scene as it comes along!

synthsin75 · Post by **synthsin75** » Tue Feb 17, 2009 11:35 pm

Great work! Can't wait to see more.

Mark Bremmer · Post by **Mark Bremmer** » Thu Feb 19, 2009 6:33 am

Nice work. Looking foward to seeing more.

tonym · Post by **tonym** » Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:00 pm

bartender wrote:I'll post more of this scene as it comes along!

Excellent news!

Also, sent you a PM via the forum.