see this animation :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qwWuZW8AzM4
cool animation with moho 5.4
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Good work! I like the design and the style of movement.
Some remarks, if you don't mind:
The background is a bit too unspecific. Some texture, and maybe some more details would be especially helpful when you pull out the camera for the final gag.
The ant could do with a bit more variety in movement and speed. It now walks. But it could also run, or creep slowly under a weight.
Generally the timing could be a bit straighter, a bit faster in general. But that's mainly my personal taste.
Anyway, it's already good work, so keep it up!
Some remarks, if you don't mind:
The background is a bit too unspecific. Some texture, and maybe some more details would be especially helpful when you pull out the camera for the final gag.
The ant could do with a bit more variety in movement and speed. It now walks. But it could also run, or creep slowly under a weight.
Generally the timing could be a bit straighter, a bit faster in general. But that's mainly my personal taste.
Anyway, it's already good work, so keep it up!
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