Not very good, but GTA: Jr... a Day at the Park (intro)

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Not very good, but GTA: Jr... a Day at the Park (intro)

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This is the intro to the up and coming Grand Theft Auto Parody, GTA Jr.

And, without further ado... http://www.ace-dev.net/gta.wmv
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The animation style is really creepy and minimalistic. I would spend some more time into the characters. Although I like the body style of the green shirted person. :) Its minimalistic and may stand for its own. But the surroundings appear even more minimalistic which is not a good idea.

The ray gun - or what ever the yellow thing is. ;) - appears to fast and behaves a little strange. It seems even a bit to big.

Perhaps you can even low down the background noise of the voices?!
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I've been looking for a program to get rid of the background noise, and i have a very bad microphone. Thx for your comments tho.

The style is creepy??? what??? lol
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It's too disjointed. When the kid whips out his big yellow weapon(!), next thing we see is an ice cream in his hand. It's actions and consequences; there's too big a jump from the action of producing a weapon and the consequence of having an ice cream. Who cut all those frames out of the film?...
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uhhh, this suxxx. really.
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get rid of background noise

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kingace wrote:I've been looking for a program to get rid of the background noise, and i have a very bad microphone. Thx for your comments tho.
I think every audio programm should be able to manage this. Perhaps you give audacity (open source) a try.
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Re: get rid of background noise

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pintman wrote:Perhaps you give audacity (open source) a try.
I second this. I use audacity every day for all of my audio editing.
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Post by Max Power »

Getting rid of B/G noise can be tough. The best, and therefore VERY EXPENSIVE, solution is Wavelab with the Waves Restoration bundle. But with noise that loud nothing is perfect.

Best bet in the future is to check your levels before hand and make sure you have the right gain structure. Ex. The volume knob closest to the source should be the loudest then reducing as it goes down the chain to the recording medium. Conversely, if the Microphone is on low volume and the next knob is at max, you are boosting the volume of the noise as well as the Vocal.

I use a nice little Mackie 1202 mixer that has great Preamps for the price and with a standard SM58, I get great results.

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(sorry if I ramble, I went to school for this stuff)
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