My best animation- New! Shinobi Noir Ch 3

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 6:43 am

I think this is one of my best animations- Not just due to the actual animation but also just overall put together

For alot of the talking I used blend morphs and this is the first episode to do so

Theres not alot of action in this one; it's more dialogue and fleshing out the story- hope you like the voice actors

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fT8NgKsPoSU

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:32 pm

Looks awesome! I don't know the character name, but I kept waiting for the one with the husky voice to say "Autobots, transform and roll out!"

GCharb · Post by **GCharb** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:59 pm

I like it, poser scenes?

My only complain is about the shading on the characters, I find it too opaque.

Great job!

jonbo · Post by **jonbo** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:46 pm

I liked it. There is in my opinion, a little too much eyebrow movement in some places. You could get away with a little less.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:16 pm

jonbo wrote:I liked it. There is in my opinion, a little too much eyebrow movement in some places. You could get away with a little less.

yah i think so to now that i watch it- went overboard with the blendmorph i think

SvenFoster · Post by **SvenFoster** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 8:49 pm

really like the style and story..

Cant comment on the audio as I watched it muted (nothing personal, lovely wife complaining about noise

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I would agree with the other comments the shadows looked wrong but the eyebrows man...since I didnt have the audio on all I saw was eyebrows...wiggle wiggle wiggle... I half hope that when I get a chance to listen to the audio it will be clown or circus music or maybe the birdie song..nan na nana nana naa. lol

ok harsh. did enjoy it tho. say it again, getting past 15secs is impressive any day of the week.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 9:34 pm

yah without the sound its just gums flapping as this whole episode was pretty much plot and dialogue except for the end

SvenFoster · Post by **SvenFoster** » Wed Aug 10, 2011 10:42 pm

kellz5460 wrote:yah without the sound its just gums flapping as this whole episode was pretty much plot and dialogue except for the end

had a chance to re watch it with sound and the eyebrows are much less distracting.
you say its just gums flapping but your style is full of strong poses and holding them with the dialog works.
waiting for the next episode