Questions (first animation)

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:56 pm

Here's my first animation using ASP, although I've practised with other programs before, I've never made anything as "advanced" as this ^_^.

It's an odd script, the idea was just to create a simple conversation to practice with.

Enjoy,

*content warning / strong language and sexual references*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wmx4RI5h3Ro

Cheers,
Lee

KenW · Post by **KenW** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:44 pm

It may be wise in the future to give some type of viewer discretion notice before airing content of such language , Just as a courtesy . Thanks

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:46 pm

KenW wrote:It may be wise in the future to give some type of viewer discretion notice before airing content of such language , Just as a courtesy . Thanks

Cheers, Ken. I've edited the post

slowtiger · Post by **slowtiger** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 5:12 pm

Internet is for adults. Don't click links if you can't stand the world.

(Sorry, have to say this. Even in my country (germany) there are groups who want to make the world look like kindergarten, instead of solving problems.)

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:23 pm

slowtiger wrote:Internet is for adults. Don't click links if you can't stand the world.

(Sorry, have to say this. Even in my country (germany) there are groups who want to make the world look like kindergarten, instead of solving problems.)

Well...the internet is also accessed by impressionable kids, and it doesn't hurt to give a heads up if the content is a bit racy. Solving problems? By cursing!? I must be missing something...

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:25 pm

Alright, dudes! Chill

I don't mind putting content warning on my stuff.

Any feedback?

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:27 am

I thought it was uncomfortable on a number of levels. The characters are way different in style from the photographic background (sometimes that can work, but mostly it doesn't), the dialogue is offensive without being funny, and the theme is just not interesting. Sorry, but you DID ask.

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:50 am

That's OK, I was looking for feedback, positive and negative.

This was my first animation, the dialogue is taken from a script I wrote ages ago and was just used to practice with.

Thanks for the honesty.