Character design

walktoon · Post by **walktoon** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:17 am

Please give suggestions for this character.

Genete · Post by **Genete** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:06 am

Looks pretty good.
Maybe due to its detailed construction you can make a close up of his face, where I could be found some improvements tips.
-G

jwlane · Post by **jwlane** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:41 am

I'd simplify the deltoid, oblique and ab muscles. I think less detail will look more natural in those places. I have to keep a mirror handy, myself.

This is an interesting project.

Imago · Post by **Imago** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:50 am

Ehi, it's good!
I think it's perfect...

walktoon · Post by **walktoon** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:03 pm

Thanks to all for helping to come best result.
Modified character. Please give your suggestion for this.

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:18 pm

You should make him a ninja...and also a turtle.

Nah, kidding. It's perfect.

Joppa · Post by **Joppa** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:11 pm

which techniques are you using for the shadows?

Genete · Post by **Genete** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:58 pm

The correction on the hair makes his head look better.
I prefer the more detailed chest like in the first image. Anyway the drawings are quite good. Some animation would make it more interesting

-G

Post by **Víctor Paredes** » Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:05 pm

It's a beautiful work, walktoon. I just think the left arm is a little weird, it looks as if it were just scaled by the bones, maybe a little of point accommodation could improve it.

walktoon · Post by **walktoon** » Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:49 am

Thanks to all for your nice comments and guidance.
I hope this will be better. Please give suggestions for this character.

Just masking is used for the shadows. Black color is filled all the shapes in the masking layer. Layer Blur radius is 3 and the Opacity is 35%

J. Baker · Post by **J. Baker** » Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:02 pm

Nice work!

Here's a quick edit...

walktoon · Post by **walktoon** » Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:12 pm

Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting

J. Baker · Post by **J. Baker** » Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:45 am

walktoon wrote:Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting

No problem, you're already doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work!