3 Part Serious Animation ( SCREENSHOTS INSIDE! )

aleXean · Post by **aleXean** » Wed Sep 29, 2010 2:59 am

Hey LM!

I wrote a 3 part animation a while ago and now I've finally got around to the fun part... character design! ( Oh the dread! ) I just thought I would post all the screenshots I have as I go considering I don't have much yet.

Lemme here your suggestions!

Vane Grudner with short hair...

Or Long Hair?

The Verge

Backgrounds ( None are fully complete )

( Haven't scratched the surface on this one yet )

Still need to do Vane's body, as well as a lot of more tweaking to The Verge this weekend. More photos coming tomorrow!

Thanks guys!

lwaxana · Post by **lwaxana** » Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:18 am

I really like The Verge. He would fit right in on a show like Samurai Jack. The only thing I would suggest to change on him is the shadow or gradient below his belt. It doesn't seem like there would be that much depth between the belt and loin cloth.

For Vane, you might consider adjusting the colors. The other art you've shown is more muted/grayish and lower contrast and I think it works well that way. For Vane I'd also lower the ears a bit.

I like the background with the clump of trees to the left. They look really really thick. It's quite unique and worth playing up.

Looking forward to seeing more!

aleXean · Post by **aleXean** » Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:14 pm

Thanks lwaxana I am making many changes based on your comment now! Will edit this when I finish.