Noisy Neighbours

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:01 pm

Here's my second attempt at animation. It's a comedy sketch.

Hopefully you'll see what is more my style of humour, rather than the first animation I posted.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vF2d03ddpIU

Cheers!

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Thu Jan 21, 2010 2:50 pm

Shall I take it positively that no one has felt the need to give me tips on how to improve this?

Acochran_89 · Post by **Acochran_89** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:19 am

Well it was indeed funny. It made me crack a little laugh. The animation wasn't great however, it fit the style (in my opinion anyways). The things that the animation did well: told the story, added to the humor, got the point across as to what the characters were doing.

As long as you do those things, you are on the right track my friend

LeeHasPencil · Post by **LeeHasPencil** » Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:55 am

Thanks for checking it out and the feedback too.