let me know wa u think

toxicink · Post by **toxicink** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:52 pm

this is a new cartoon let me know wa u think

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea ... d=52138803

Genete · Post by **Genete** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:01 pm

toxicink,
On Tue Apr 07, 2009 you did a post with the same cartoon. You got 320 views and perhaps some comments.

Posting the same animation in several places only can lead to some not polite comments about it.

No comments are sometimes a feed back.

-G

jahnocli · Post by **jahnocli** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 3:05 pm

When the guy says "this is taking a long time...", that's exactly how I felt. Just about everything here needs work: the quality of the animation, soundtrack, storyline, characters, staging, composition, backgrounds... Try looking at your favourite cartoons in great detail -- with DVD players nowadays, it's easy to break down cartoon animatiion and see how animators get those great effects, and how they achieve fluid movement.

Read books on composition, animation and writing for cartoons -- practice drawing, analyse and copy your favourite styles, and you will start to see some improvements. The two most important qualities in all this are patience and determination.

toxicink · Post by **toxicink** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:35 pm

Genete wrote:toxicink,
On Tue Apr 07, 2009 you did a post with the same cartoon. You got 320 views and perhaps some comments.

Posting the same animation in several places only can lead to some not polite comments about it.

No comments are sometimes a feed back.

-G

i didnt have internet since then my bad for not going to a friends computer or the lybrary and your right 320 people did look at it but not a single soul said a thing and that kinda botherd me eather it is to bad to coment on or I have some thing

dont know what to say
and im glad you rememberd how thoughtfull