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My own AS Halloween Entries

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For the Fox contest:

I have absolutely no expectations about winning but it does show AS well, I think.

http://www.aniboom.com/animation-video/ ... -the-Door/
http://www.aniboom.com/animation-video/ ... he-Closet/
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Post by J. Baker »

LOL, the three old ladies are hilarious. Nice work! ;)
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Post by Acochran_89 »

LOL funny stuff...
I was reading some of the comments on the video page, and, who cares that it looks like family guy? it's funny either way. I liked it and I like the series you make also!

Great work
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Post by Víctor Paredes »

Hi Mike!
Nice to see you!
I have no audio here, so I will look your animations tomorrow on my computer (anyway, for me it's pretty hard to understand spoken english, but I'll do my best :wink:)
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Post by jahnocli »

Great writing! Both episodes are really funny! Is it on TV? It should be...
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
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Post by slowtiger »

Best part: the voices and the dialogue. Really made me laugh.
Timing was OK. The editing could be better - too long shots.
I appreciate the attempt to create emotions. However, the style doesn't really support this. Not enough wrinkles in the faces, too clean lines - IMO.

Overall a good piece of work!
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Post by sinclair »

Hey-

I actually watched these a couple times already, (they were worth watching more than once)-

Good stuff-

S
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Post by mkelley »

Thanks all for the kind words -- they are much appreciated.

Pretty obviously writing is my strong suit, animation not so much. But if we can make people laugh (or even just bring a smile to their faces) it's worth it.
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The Mystery at the Door was hysterical - very nice work.
~Danimal
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