My Second Animation - Emilys letter

[JD]

This is my end result of my second ever animation that i made today.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ao1J-J_q4fY
Time Taken: 9h 47min

It's called Emily's letter

A very different style to my first animation.
In both of my animations i have just searched for music that i think tells a story.
I try to express my version of the story is into the animations.

To me personally i think i rushed this animation and with some work it could become allot better.
i am still experimenting with different styles at the moment so please bare with me.

As i said before please comment and give any constructive criticism.

[JD]

[Danimal]

Very nice, I liked the way the music and animation went together. At the beginning there were some jerky movements to correspond with the acoustic guitar. I get that it was intentional, but honestly it just looked like there were glitches in the video.

Other than that, very well done!