And now my newest project with a friend
we have not thought of a title yet
we have been working on the characters mostly, but also a bit of the story.
Aliens once came to earth thousands of years ago, they were a dying race due to several wars. In earth they found food, water and other important minerals, e.g. ores, As they left earth they took some humans with them, they used them to breed new soldiers for the war. Now in a not to distant future, they return to find humans now advanced and a threat, the aliens due to the human breeds have also changed, they have become bigger and stronger, making them win there wars, they now return to destroy the humans and take over the lush planet earth, and every other planet in the galaxy.
Now 2 friends from childhood, escape a ambush on thier town and vow to become soldiers and defeat the aliens for what they did to there town, family and friends.
Unintitled Project
Moderators: Víctor Paredes, Belgarath, slowtiger
An observation. Maybe I'm a bit old-fashioned, but I do believe that a writer should make an extra effort to spell correctly. "Unintitled"!? "A ambush"? And I'd expect a writer to know the difference between "their" and "there". It's just part of the craft; if I was to work as a painter, I'd expect to know something about colour theory...
Get a spell checker. Provide links to web pages or blogs -- don't give garbled breakdowns of stories in a forum. Work on presentation and formatting. Tidy up your act -- the way it looks at the moment is way too amateurish (I would guess) to interest most people.
Sorry if this all sounds harsh -- it's just tough love...
Get a spell checker. Provide links to web pages or blogs -- don't give garbled breakdowns of stories in a forum. Work on presentation and formatting. Tidy up your act -- the way it looks at the moment is way too amateurish (I would guess) to interest most people.
Sorry if this all sounds harsh -- it's just tough love...
You can't have everything. Where would you put it?
