New work

jitendas · Post by **jitendas** » Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:22 am

Hi,
There is a link of my new work,
I m waiting for ur coments

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xDaRuX8ETgU

funksmaname · Post by **funksmaname** » Tue Nov 04, 2008 10:56 am

hey jutendas,
nice job, like the hand and the stickmans tentative first steps...
btw, you misspelled 'create' in the outro

jitendas · Post by **jitendas** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:49 am

oooo
sorry.....

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Wed Nov 05, 2008 7:43 pm

The video got a good message, but the animation and drawings are not too much impressive.

jitendas · Post by **jitendas** » Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:15 am

Thank you for your coment.
I'll try to improve my animation and drawings also.

Ronbo · Post by **Ronbo** » Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:31 pm

jitendas,

Nice work. I liked the interaction of the hand with the stick figure, in particular the figure being nudged by the pencil point. Also, the hand drawing the tree which subsequently transitions to full color worked well.

My only constructive criticism would be that the continents on the globe at the end could be drawn a little more accurately while still being playful. Also, it would be an improvement if you could wrap them around the globe a bit so that they appear more like they are on the surface of a sphere and less like a flat image being dragged across a circle. You might also consider removing the black outlines from the land masses. The globe as is works okay with your stick figure, but it's a rather jarring transition from the nicely-drawn forest immediately preceeding it which is why I'm suggesting a little more refinement.

By the way, I am curious as to how you achieved the hand/stick figure interaction. Did you create this all in AS?

jitendas · Post by **jitendas** » Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:57 am

Thank you For your nice coment and also thank you again for your constructive criticism.
I create the hand/stick figure interaction in AS?