Theatrum Comicum of Insects
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Hi friends,
This is my first messege on this forum (but not the last one)
My name is Fran Bravo. I'm illustrator and animator and i really like Anime Studio.
You can see my last short film here:
http://nicktoonsnetwork.nick.com/nnaf/viewshorts.jhtml
bye
This is my first messege on this forum (but not the last one)
My name is Fran Bravo. I'm illustrator and animator and i really like Anime Studio.
You can see my last short film here:
http://nicktoonsnetwork.nick.com/nnaf/viewshorts.jhtml
bye
Wow, this is first class stuff! Good style, snappy animation, lots of ideas.
But I need to see that one in much better resolution, as it's all lost in the small version on Nick's site.
Did you really do that all in AS? Nice style, and a perfect fit to the abilities of the program.
There's only some points I think which could be improved: the title sequence switches between photograph and drawing, and that looks like it's two different films. The inserts need to be bigger, if the words are important you should take care that they are readable. And the scribbled nonsense around the short scenes tends to distract the viewer, I tried to decipher them and lost the gags.
But I need to see that one in much better resolution, as it's all lost in the small version on Nick's site.
Did you really do that all in AS? Nice style, and a perfect fit to the abilities of the program.
There's only some points I think which could be improved: the title sequence switches between photograph and drawing, and that looks like it's two different films. The inserts need to be bigger, if the words are important you should take care that they are readable. And the scribbled nonsense around the short scenes tends to distract the viewer, I tried to decipher them and lost the gags.
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What a wonderful animation! If you view the
short on full screen the details are more
viewable. I enjoyed the show!
short on full screen the details are more
viewable. I enjoyed the show!
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Thanks everybody
Probably you're right "Slowtiger". The scribbled nonsense text could distract the attention, that's why put like soft layer, but I see it's not softer enough.
I put photographs because i wanted to give a very classical atmosphere, as an ancient studio of a 17th century naturalist. It helped me to introduce the theme and make more contrast wiht the real comical development of the film.
Everything it's allways improved.
Anyway I'm very glad about your advises.
Probably you're right "Slowtiger". The scribbled nonsense text could distract the attention, that's why put like soft layer, but I see it's not softer enough.
I put photographs because i wanted to give a very classical atmosphere, as an ancient studio of a 17th century naturalist. It helped me to introduce the theme and make more contrast wiht the real comical development of the film.
Everything it's allways improved.
Anyway I'm very glad about your advises.
