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BrotherAnimations
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I animated my character. But it is simple :|

Post by BrotherAnimations »

OMG MY GIF ANIMATING SYSTEM SUX!!!!!!
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WHY IS IT ALL DOTS!!!
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Post by Genete »

3.8 MB!!! it is huge!!!!
resize it please. People with old MS Explorer would hate you!

And regarding to the character:
better do a simple/flat ear than try to recreate the realistic looking. The rest looks good to me :)

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Post by BrotherAnimations »

Genete wrote:3.8 MB!!! it is huge!!!!
resize it please. People with old MS Explorer would hate you!

And regarding to the character:
better do a simple/flat ear than try to recreate the realistic looking. The rest looks good to me :)

-G
lol thanks, ya, the ear gives me a hard time :?
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Post by BrotherAnimations »

Eh, I can change the size. SORRY!!!!
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Post by BrotherAnimations »

Also, there is one think everybody missed. NO EYEBROWS :shock:
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Post by dsaenz825 »

That's pretty good, it would look a bit better with shading on the skin though.
And I agree with Genete, make a less realistic ear (make it simple).

Good Job though, keep it up! :D
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Post by synthsin75 »

I use MS Gif Animator and had that same problem. If similar, set the 'import dither method' to 'solid' before opening the source file and it should be prettier.

I like the eyes, but I agree about the ear and shading.
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Post by fraaaankieee »

I didn't notice the no eyebrows until you said so. I thought maybe it was part of your unique style: Speed Racer had no lips!

The back part of the hair is moving, and doesn't have a natural look. You can fix this by binding points of the parts You want moving to the bones.

Looks like you got a good start on it.

IMHO, you best fix for the ear is to make one curve to separate the outer lobe, and then make the inner parts the same color as the outer.
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Post by BrotherAnimations »

I fixed the ear :D. But I will poste it later
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Post by Rudiger »

Wow, some nice shading there! One thing, though, most Anime characters have shadow at the top of the eyeball, instead of the bottom. Try this and see how it compares to you.

Also, I think you need to give her more head (there's got to be a better way to say that :?). That is, the top of her head doesn't seem to go high enough, although you'll probably work that out when you try to add eyebrows. In the "How to Draw Anime" books I've seen, they mostly have the top of the eyes smack bang in the middle of the head, not including the hair.

Also, animated-gif probably isn't the best format to use, especially at that resolution. I would recommend using an AVI file with the XVID codec. Most people should be able to play it, whatever their OS is, but it might be trickier to embed it in the message like you have.
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Post by BrotherAnimations »

Rudiger wrote:Wow, some nice shading there! One thing, though, most Anime characters have shadow at the top of the eyeball, instead of the bottom. Try this and see how it compares to you.

Also, I think you need to give her more head (there's got to be a better way to say that :?). That is, the top of her head doesn't seem to go high enough, although you'll probably work that out when you try to add eyebrows. In the "How to Draw Anime" books I've seen, they mostly have the top of the eyes smack bang in the middle of the head, not including the hair.

Also, animated-gif probably isn't the best format to use, especially at that resolution. I would recommend using an AVI file with the XVID codec. Most people should be able to play it, whatever their OS is, but it might be trickier to embed it in the message like you have.
ya, my character does seem unasual in a few parts, ill fix that up :P She would look wierd when i give her a body if i dont fix her up right.
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