First job. A famous spanish presenter

luisba · Post by **luisba** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 8:54 am

This is my first job. Its about a spanish local tv famous presenter, a private jocke. He do all those movements when he speaking!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=61SzYmQ7VvQ

slowtiger · Post by **slowtiger** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:45 am

Hey, that's a nice one. You captured those habits nicely, even that manner to lean towards the camera - I know that from other presenters. And I like your drawing style, it's personal and interesting.

You could, however, improve your work easily:
1. Improve the sound quality. I couldn't understand a word he was saying, because the music was too loud, and music and speech both were distorted.

2. He could be more dynamic, which mostly means that the transition from one pose to the next could be much faster.

3. It is a bit irritating that his mouth is completely hidden by his moustache when he's silent. There's a general rule that mouth phases shouldn't be too different from each other because otherwise lipsync becomes too hectic.

Rasheed · Post by **Rasheed** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 12:13 pm

slowtiger wrote:3. It is a bit irritating that his mouth is completely hidden by his moustache when he's silent. There's a general rule that mouth phases shouldn't be too different from each other because otherwise lipsync becomes too hectic.

That was what annoyed me as well.

And it was too short. Please, let us have some more!

luisba · Post by **luisba** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:01 pm

thanks for the tips. Actally he is like a human chartoon...

http://es.youtube.com/watch?v=zYBMNRfDI2I

Im going to solve the sound.

luisba · Post by **luisba** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:56 pm

the problem is I recorded the audio and the music in shame track. Now It sound little better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQy2qRb8Wng