Judson Boys (Gone Fishing)

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Judson Boys (Gone Fishing)

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Here is my latest animation done with Anime Studio. Let me know what you think. Any feedback would be great!

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Nice gag! But, for me, that straight-on compositional style is kind of drab and uninteresting. Some more variety and angles would really help...
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Yeah I know what you mean about the angles. I think it would of made it better. The reason for not doing it is because there is going to be a new episode of this like every other week. So It had to be something I could do quick. We will see how it goes though. I might just do one once a month and then work on the animation a bit more adding different angles and stuff. It just hard because I'm also working on a lot of other stuff. Thanks for the review though.

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