My first Cartoon with Anime

Libertycourt · Post by **Libertycourt** » Mon Sep 10, 2007 8:38 pm

Welcome fellow members, this is my first try at animation. With alittle help from anime support and ALL the members from this forum (ie. Tips, discussions, techniques,etc.), I was able to fudge my way through my first video. I tip my hat to all who do this, this may look easy to some, but as I know now, it quite intense---thanks

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J8U5Cxqb_m8

Let me know some positive/negative feedback

Thanks

Liberty Court

Genete · Post by **Genete** » Mon Sep 10, 2007 10:01 pm

Superb!!!
I like the story idea, the story telling and the music.
I don't like the boring similar girls and boy faces and pre made speaking mouths.

I've enjoyed watching it what is the important thing.

-G

Libertycourt · Post by **Libertycourt** » Mon Sep 10, 2007 11:13 pm

Genete

Thanks for the response

; I do agree the faces and mouths are redundant and thats something I will address on my next attempt. Thanks again for responding; any advice is well accepted and can only improve the work we do---THANKS

Liberty court

toonertime · Post by **toonertime** » Tue Sep 11, 2007 1:35 am

hey that was really great, especially
for a first animation! The voices made the
toon interesting.

My first Cartoon with Anime

My first Cartoon with Anime

Thanks Genete

first try