Sweet Holy High

[jasonbice15]

Hello Friends,

I'm new on here but did this animation about a year ago. I know it's a bit long, but any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

[Little Yamori]

Well, I'll start off by saying this isn't exactly my favorite type of humor (maybe if I was back in my 20's), but that being said, your story pace was pretty good, as it moved along at a nice clip with constant story developments as to what was going to happen. I don't know necessarily how to critique your animation style, in that I'm not sure if you wanted the characters to look simple in design (ala South Park) as part of the whole vibe you were going for. The sound quality was good (better than mine) and although that might not seem like an animation technique, it's still part of the work and I feel deserves mention. I think a little more polishing character movements would go a long way.

Don't know if this helps.

LY

P.S. I did laugh out loud at the owl joke

[djwaterman]

For what it was, that style of humor, it was pretty good.