Stinky and the Lame!

figment68 · Post by **figment68** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:58 pm

I am new to Anime Studio. I currently have ASP7 and have been teaching myself how to use the program over the last four weeks or so. These little animations are the results so far. I welcome any feedback and or criticisms. Please rate and comment if you would like.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYeLhuch ... sy2qXcaepC

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:44 pm

Not bad for 4 weeks. Pleasant drawing style and good use of particles for the confusion effects. But the stories are kinda boring, though...jk

A commom problem in beginners work is "floatiness". See my comments to Conner_36 along similar lines: My First Animated Video

Good start. Keep it up.

figment68 · Post by **figment68** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:50 pm

neeters_guy wrote:Not bad for 4 weeks. Pleasant drawing style and good use of particles for the confusion effects. But the stories are kinda boring, though...jk

A commom problem in beginners work is "floatiness". See my comments to Conner_36 along similar lines: My First Animated Video

Good start. Keep it up.

Thanks for watching, and thank you for the helpful criticism.

slowtiger · Post by **slowtiger** » Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:54 pm

Definitely good style, and at least enough movement. And good rigging so far.

Neeters alrady said it: get rid of the floatiness, get some good story, and I'd add: use a faster pace with more dynamic.