My First job as an animator, Coffee Commercial

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Dj Manik
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My First job as an animator, Coffee Commercial

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This is my first job as an animator so I'm really excited. This video could get displayed on a a new vending machines this company is distributing, so that could give a lot more exposure. Any comments would be greatly appreciated .. =)

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JXanwZgFxhk

Take care everyone and have a good weekend !
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The pitch is well presented and the voice work, music, editing support it perfectly. The graphics need work though, ie., fonts, colors, art should be more cohesive. Also I'm glad you took the time to animate your spokesman so he isn't just a talking head (I like him tossing the cup in the trash). The animation is stiff in places, but it gets the job done and is fine for local or kiosk advertising.

Congrats on your first animation gig. Keep it up. I see improvement every time you post.
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Thanks neeters_guy. I really appreciate that =)

I learned a lot doing this, one as I went. Are the Drawing tools better in ASP 8? I've seen the promo vids on you tube and the new animation features look fantastic. I'm still using ASP 5 ..
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Update: Just Bought Anime studio 8.1 !!!! =)
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