I don't think I have a future as a voice actor but I'm sure I could make an improvement after I spend some time listening to professional voice actors. It sounds like I'm reading so I only tested the title scene. Does anyone know of someone who teaches the skill of voice acting? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-NxZH1Jvs8
I liked it. I don't know of any voice acting sites, but you could make your voice higher or lower to avoid that "sounds like I'm reading it" effect. Or use Audacity (freeware) to add effects to your voice to give it that alien feel.
