Phase 9 Episode 2

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:57 am

Well this is the second episode in the story....like...98 to go LOL

actually thats about right because each ep is like 3 or 4 pages and total page wise in the novel I would make about 100 + 5 minute episodes if I ever wanted to finish it

Skip to :50 seconds if you hate japanese songs because I made an Opening just so ppl can refrence the names of the characters

Watch here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=loqUmWGNA0o

Synopsis: cont from Ep 1

June and Randi start work at the San Theed Tabloid

Nisa has an altercation with a hunter in the desert

Danimal · Post by **Danimal** » Sun Mar 06, 2011 1:47 pm

Really very nice - you have captured the feel of anime perfectly, good story and humor as well. Keep 'em coming!

lwaxana · Post by **lwaxana** » Wed Mar 09, 2011 1:40 am

Looking great! One suggestion is to get some volunteer voice actors involved to add more variety to the speech. It will freshen up the whole story to have different speech patterns and tone of voice interacting.

PARKER · Post by **PARKER** » Wed Mar 09, 2011 1:48 am

This is a very nice work, i like the colors you used for your characters.
I suggest you to use BGs that fit your animation.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Wed Mar 09, 2011 3:07 am

its neat cuz after I posted it on newgrounds i found some ppl that want to voice act-

I was debating using some computer voices and still might for the parts that I dont have-

I'll have to add subtitles too next time