Eve of October... even closer to being finished.

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Eve of October... even closer to being finished.

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Well, actually have made pretty good progress this week (despite having a very busy week outside the project). Good start on the action sequence, and actually getting close to heading into the Eve/Freya scene. This particular clip does have some minor faults, but its pretty close. hope you all enjoy. Marzout!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fbBDt_NPNxo
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neomarz1 wrote:Well, actually have made pretty good progress this week (despite having a very busy week outside the project). Good start on the action sequence, and actually getting close to heading into the Eve/Freya scene. This particular clip does have some minor faults, but its pretty close. hope you all enjoy. Marzout!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fbBDt_NPNxo
Awesome! Haven't been on the boards long so it's great to see some work done by others using AS. I didn't catch the audio (speakers off for the time being, girlfriend is asleep), but the animation is nice and smooth. Great character design, excellent work on all the backdrops. Keep up the good work!
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Really cool. You're killing us though - we want to see the whole episode!
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Danimal wrote:Really cool. You're killing us though - we want to see the whole episode!

I'll try to refrain myself till the "End" this time, but I am still having BGM added. I just want to see if anyone finds any obvious flaws I may have missed. Marzout
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Looking good! The first time I watched it, I thought the TV reporter guy in the helicopter (5:57) showed up again as a soldier (7:24). When I paused it, I see that the hair and shades are different colors...a different character apparently. I would recommend using a more generic soldier to avoid that moment of ambiguity. Anyway, overall it's looks great, the environment effects are especially good.

Keep on going!
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Really nice work. The voice acting the art... everthing works.
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It's coming along nicely! The only minor detail is you may want to cut down on the use of the zooming a bit.
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neeters_guy wrote:Looking good! The first time I watched it, I thought the TV reporter guy in the helicopter (5:57) showed up again as a soldier (7:24). When I paused it, I see that the hair and shades are different colors...a different character apparently. I would recommend using a more generic soldier to avoid that moment of ambiguity. Anyway, overall it's looks great, the environment effects are especially good.

Keep on going!
Well, I hoped that wasn't going to be too obvious... I really liked those Aviators... I tried using them on another Character... didnt match very well... Hmmmm? Yeah, I guess I need to work that out. That would be embarrasing. Thanks, I'll make a point to fix that. -Mars
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