School Champloo Episode 2 Anime

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Sat Jan 29, 2011 4:57 am

Episode 2 of my anime....cuz i'm bored enjoy

Synopsis:

Rei decides to make a Ghost in the Shell movie
Heita finds out Asano like Rei
The teacher Mr. Takahara assigns partners for the History Project

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gafELUnjMuQ

BTW comment- tell me if it sucks and if you want me to die in a fire or i'm ok

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:17 am

nobody likes it? or hates it? waah

sbtamu · Post by **sbtamu** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:29 am

It is the weekend and this forum is slow during this time. I have watched it twice since you posted it and still thinking of things about it....

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:29 am

i know- i'm just starved of constructive criticism

neeters_guy · Post by **neeters_guy** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:51 pm

Your character designs are appealing, but avoid relying on cliches to show emotion (floating hearts, gushing tears, chibi faces, speedlines, etc.). Focus on telling just one story completely with fewer characters.

kellz5460 · Post by **kellz5460** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:04 pm

thx for replying-

i'm actually purposely doing those things because this is more of a fan parody of the anime school rumble which is rife with lame jokes and full of cliches

as for the story- this show really has no story- its just about the one girl Rei that likes to make movies and theres some lovey-lovey- thing going on between her, her friend and some guys at school

I'm actually going to incorportate alot of parodies of different animes as I progress with this show