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Questions (first animation)
Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 1:56 pm
by LeeHasPencil
Here's my first animation using ASP, although I've practised with other programs before, I've never made anything as "advanced" as this ^_^.
It's an odd script, the idea was just to create a simple conversation to practice with.
Enjoy,
*content warning / strong language and sexual references*
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wmx4RI5h3Ro
Cheers,
Lee
Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:44 pm
by KenW
It may be wise in the future to give some type of viewer discretion notice before airing content of such language , Just as a courtesy . Thanks

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:46 pm
by LeeHasPencil
KenW wrote:It may be wise in the future to give some type of viewer discretion notice before airing content of such language , Just as a courtesy . Thanks

Cheers, Ken. I've edited the post

Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 5:12 pm
by slowtiger
Internet is for adults. Don't click links if you can't stand the world.
(Sorry, have to say this. Even in my country (germany) there are groups who want to make the world look like kindergarten, instead of solving problems.)
Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:23 pm
by jahnocli
slowtiger wrote:Internet is for adults. Don't click links if you can't stand the world.
(Sorry, have to say this. Even in my country (germany) there are groups who want to make the world look like kindergarten, instead of solving problems.)
Well...the internet is also accessed by impressionable kids, and it doesn't hurt to give a heads up if the content is a bit racy. Solving problems? By cursing!? I must be missing something...
Posted: Sun Dec 27, 2009 7:25 pm
by LeeHasPencil
Alright, dudes! Chill
I don't mind putting content warning on my stuff.
Any feedback?

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:27 am
by jahnocli
I thought it was uncomfortable on a number of levels. The characters are way different in style from the photographic background (sometimes that can work, but mostly it doesn't), the dialogue is offensive without being funny, and the theme is just not interesting. Sorry, but you DID ask.
Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:50 am
by LeeHasPencil
That's OK, I was looking for feedback, positive and negative.
This was my first animation, the dialogue is taken from a script I wrote ages ago and was just used to practice with.
Thanks for the honesty.