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Character design

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 3:17 am
by walktoon
Please give suggestions for this character.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:06 am
by Genete
Looks pretty good.
Maybe due to its detailed construction you can make a close up of his face, where I could be found some improvements tips.
-G

muscles

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:41 am
by jwlane
I'd simplify the deltoid, oblique and ab muscles. I think less detail will look more natural in those places. I have to keep a mirror handy, myself.

This is an interesting project.

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:50 am
by Imago
Ehi, it's good!
I think it's perfect...

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:03 pm
by walktoon
Thanks to all for helping to come best result.
Modified character. Please give your suggestion for this.
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 7:18 pm
by neeters_guy
You should make him a ninja...and also a turtle. :wink:

Nah, kidding. It's perfect.

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:11 pm
by Joppa
which techniques are you using for the shadows?

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 10:58 pm
by Genete
The correction on the hair makes his head look better.
I prefer the more detailed chest like in the first image. Anyway the drawings are quite good. Some animation would make it more interesting ;)
-G

Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:05 pm
by VĂ­ctor Paredes
It's a beautiful work, walktoon. I just think the left arm is a little weird, it looks as if it were just scaled by the bones, maybe a little of point accommodation could improve it.

Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 11:49 am
by walktoon
Thanks to all for your nice comments and guidance.
I hope this will be better. Please give suggestions for this character.
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Just masking is used for the shadows. Black color is filled all the shapes in the masking layer. Layer Blur radius is 3 and the Opacity is 35%

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:02 pm
by J. Baker
Nice work! ;) Here's a quick edit...
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:12 pm
by walktoon
Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting

Posted: Wed Dec 09, 2009 5:45 am
by J. Baker
walktoon wrote:Thanks a lot J. Baker...
Very nice... Thank you very much for your guidance and interesting
No problem, you're already doing a wonderful job. Keep up the good work! ;)