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My first caracter with AS

Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 3:12 am
by GCharb
Helle all!

Been looking at AS at work for a bit, felt in love with it so I decided to dabble with it and create a caracter.

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I havnt decided on hair yet, any comments are welcome and very much so encouraged, many thanks in advance.

AS definattly went into the xmass gift to myself this year!

Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 10:24 am
by Genete
About the character:
Pro: The general drawings are good. Shadows on face are achieved pretty well. Face is cartoonish so it is a good point. Good desition to put 4 fingers only.

Against: Jersey neck is a little strange (has he neck?). And its lines thickness should be corrected homogenously. It has a bump in the trousers (front and back) that I don't like. He must looks thin as the general shape of the character.

Overal point 7 over 10. :wink:

Posted: Sat Dec 23, 2006 5:23 pm
by GCharb
7 out of 10, not too bad! :wink:

Heheh thanks, and you are right about the jersey and line thickness and yes he's got a neck!

Here are a few changes I made, I really like the drawing/2D modeling tools, huge ammount of control!

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Thanks again!

Posted: Sun Dec 24, 2006 11:25 am
by Genete
I'm glad my comments to your drawing were welcomed.
See you.