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Company logo.

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:02 pm
by CowsCanFly
My dad asked me to make him, his company loge in gif.

So i made one in twenty minuts:
Image
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What do you think?

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 4:27 pm
by CowsCanFly
no comments?

Well you hate me... :(

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:04 pm
by VĂ­ctor Paredes
how is named your dad's company?
does they design Flash's costumes?

i would eliminate the noisy blue lines, and maybe i'd make the logo a little less symetrical. the current is a little like the finishing 80's logos. i dont' know... do you remember OCP?

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 5:42 pm
by CowsCanFly
selgin wrote:how is named your dad's company?
Menorah...
selgin wrote:does they design Flash's costumes?
nope
selgin wrote:i would eliminate the noisy blue lines, and maybe i'd make the logo a little less symetrical. the current is a little like the finishing 80's logos. i dont' know... do you remember OCP?
btw, this is the logo, my dad is a programer, he just asked me to animate it.

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:06 pm
by jahnocli
You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...

Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:32 pm
by CowsCanFly
jahnocli wrote:You need to learn that "less is more". This is migraine-inducing stuff, and the blue lines are a problem. Take a look at how cartoons use "bounce", ease-in and ease-out, anticipation and reaction. Even a simple thing like this could look really professional if the movement is right...
I just did what he asked me too...

My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished... (the animation i mean :P)

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:36 am
by heyvern
I just did what he asked me too...

My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished
LOL!

Then why ask us for opinions?
Why the poll?

You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.

If your client is happy you don't need any opinions. ;)

I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.

-vern

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:40 am
by jahnocli
cowscanfly wrote:My dad wanted the lines to be that way, and he said it was purfect whan i finished... (the animation i mean)
Let's hope all your future clients are as supportive...

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:20 am
by CowsCanFly
heyvern wrote: LOL!

Then why ask us for opinions?
I just wanted to know, if it was good... ^_^
heyvern wrote:Why the poll?
I just wanted to try it... O_o
heyvern wrote:You have reduced the area of creative criticizm to such a narrow range... there isn't anything else to say.
Why? People said it sucks, np i couldent do anything else...
heyvern wrote:If your client is happy you don't need any opinions. ;)
Why not? I allways take notes of peoples opinions...
heyvern wrote:I will add my 2 cents anyway... the logo bites... I'm indifferent about the animation quality... the horrible logo overpowers it.
-vern
Thx for the honest opinion...

Posted: Sun Aug 27, 2006 10:22 am
by CowsCanFly
jahnocli wrote: Let's hope all your future clients are as supportive...
Yeah..

But what do you expect? it's my dad...