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Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 1:55 am
by Jitendas.10
Here is the link of my short film...
All tne positive and negative comments are wel come..
https://youtu.be/CuR_zdMwCGY
Regards
Jiten
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Tue Nov 27, 2018 10:48 pm
by tobbog
Hello Jiten,
it looks really great, I love the use of blur especially!
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:09 am
by rafael
Nice work!
Suggestion: Instead of "zooming" into to reframe your shots, rely more on hard cuts, like they would do in a movie/cartoon/TV. It'll give it a more professional feel. If you do decide to push-in, make sure it is motivated by the content. An example of this would be a character discovering something important and pushing into a close-up to show the reaction. Or slowly pushing in while a character is lost in thought.
I think you did a great job on this and chose a really suitable story. Excited to see what you do next!
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 9:35 am
by Jitendas.10
Thank you Tobbg for loving my work
And thank you for your tips rafael, i ll follow it....
Regards
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2018 2:03 am
by chucky
Nice to see a full story, simple but effective.
Good advice from Raphael too.
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2018 10:01 pm
by Jitendas.10
Thank u chucky
Will try to improve in my next film.
Regards
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 8:29 pm
by Little Yamori
A very pleasant story
Re: Short film...... MOLAI
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2018 9:34 pm
by Jitendas.10
Little Yamori
Thank you vry much.