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latest tryout with after effects
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:12 am
by ralph
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 5:54 am
by jorgy
Neat! Did you do the titles in after effects?
I liked the wizard, and recognized a lot of moho particle effects.
I especially liked the use of animation against a photographic background.
jorgy
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 12:41 pm
by jahnocli
I especially liked the use of animation against a photographic background.
Funny -- that was the thing I liked least. I think you have to work really hard to bring off this style of animation against a photographic background. For me, it didn't work.
J
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 1:21 pm
by hard as snails
very nice...could do with being longer and a fuller story,but looking good so far.i'm using a photo for my background and hope to post my work here in about two weeks
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 2:27 pm
by Ant_Gri3d
Add shadow on the ground and character and remove shadow behind
- it will be looks much better IMHO
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2006 7:39 pm
by jorgy
This was your second animation, right?
I agree about the shadow, and try to get the angle to match the ground.
The thing that caught my eye about the background was the pan - it wasn't static, which so many of the "animate in front of photographic backgrounds" seem to be.
sorry
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 12:00 am
by ralph
sorry if it wasn't so pretty .
I have a fulltime job and 2 children I do this
for a hobby in the late hours .This was the best i could
humanly do in about 2-3 hours.
My f......... day's are to short i need more hours in one day
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:43 am
by Rasheed
Chill out man. The critique was meant as a positive input, as an advice for improvement for your next creative attempts. If you don't make mistakes (or show them to pears and have them give positive critique on it), you will never learn anything. Practice makes perfect. So practice a lot.
Cheers!
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:09 pm
by jorgy
I agree with Rasheed... we try to be helpful and constructive in our criticism, but it may not always come across that way.
For most of us, we have regular jobs and this is something we try to do in the "spare" time, hoping to grow it into something bigger. And yes, there are definitely not enough hours in the day.
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 7:10 pm
by jorgy
jorgy wrote:The thing that caught my eye about the background was the pan - it wasn't static, which so many of the "animate in front of photographic backgrounds" seem to be.
Maybe it was a language thing, but this was supposed to be a complement! That it
wasn't like lots of other animations with a photographic background, that it was better.
I don't feel critizised.
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2006 11:55 pm
by ralph
I'm sorry if it sounded like I don't like too get critezised not at all.
I like your comment's very much but I can't leave a project unfinished,
otherwise I can't sleep at night. AND.... I work to much .
I have two jobs one is at a movie/film production firm of a friend of mine,
there i discovered my pasion for animations and motiongrafics.
look at
www.mosasaurusfilm.nl for our showcases
thanks to you all. And we will produce some animated movies in the future!
Posted: Wed Feb 01, 2006 11:32 am
by tonyrome
Way to go Ralph.
I like your attitude, F*** em all BURN EM ALL TO HELL
What did they call you !!!???
Bony Girl Arms!!!!!! Smelly Bum?????!!!!!
As for the kids ... Them F*****N brats - they sh*t all over a man when he comes home from a hard day's work at the film studio, I Know!!!! Why I oughta!!!!!!!!
Hey I checked out
http://www.mosasaurusfilm.nl/
Cool which one are you I bet youre the first one in the middle panel with the hat
Am I right? EH?
Thats it brother let it all out scream and scream at God again
IM AS MAD AS HELL AND IM NOT>>>>>>>>>