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My latest cartoon...9/11 Reptilians
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 4:31 am
by Daners
Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 10:48 am
by jahnocli
It was funny, but the presentation was kind of pedestrian. What about moving the viewpoint now and then -- some close-ups of faces, big close-ups of panic-stricken eyes or a finger jabbing the elevator buttons? It was all a bit like a stage performance.
Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy
Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2016 8:36 pm
by Daners
Thanks for the input, maybe I will consider that next time around...
Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2016 6:32 pm
by JaMike
Jahnocli's right. However, you can get away with a "stage" performance if there's a lot of good character animation, but with this minimal style you'd need to speed up the pacing a lot (notice how fast South Park is) or you start noticing the lack of full animation.
And NEVER show just a tiny part of the character on the screen (the guy on the left's arm). Zoom in a bit more or just move him.
Lots of potential though.

Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy
Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:07 am
by Daners
Another point for me to consider...thanks.
Re: My latest cartoon...9/11 Conspiracy Guy
Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2016 9:53 pm
by exobunker
Hi. So many things can happen in elevators
