Hi Guys,
Here's a little animation that I'm working on. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
cheers everyone
Dave
Re: Sign Animation WIP
Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:24 pm
by lwaxana
This looks great, I like the designs. The only thing that seemed odd was that he stops and faces the camera before putting the sign in the ground. Maybe this is to match voiceover narration? But after he turns to the camera, it doesn't look like there is any change of facial expression to indicate that he decides to suddenly plant the sign in the ground. I wonder how it would look if you took out that part where he turns to the camera. Overall, it looks really nice!
Re: Sign Animation WIP
Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:15 am
by macmonkey_1975
Hi lwaxana,
Many thanks for you kind comments and great feedback
Yep i know what you mean about the facing camera bit. I'm thinking it would be good split the action between the walk on and the planting of the sign so that I can add more time as necessary. But he is looking a bit vacant at the moment so I will probably add a a little look around to decide where the sign is going to go
Thanks again, and have a great day.
lwaxana wrote:This looks great, I like the designs. The only thing that seemed odd was that he stops and faces the camera before putting the sign in the ground. Maybe this is to match voiceover narration? But after he turns to the camera, it doesn't look like there is any change of facial expression to indicate that he decides to suddenly plant the sign in the ground. I wonder how it would look if you took out that part where he turns to the camera. Overall, it looks really nice!
