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Idrin

Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:31 pm
by shift
An animation I did for my brother's business in Japan

Re: Idrin

Posted: Sat Jan 25, 2014 9:14 pm
by Little Yamori
Looks nice, but you had one minor mistake in the Japanese, where you put "wa" it should be " は" instead of "わ", they're pronounced the same, but the first one is a subject marker, while the later is simply a phonetic.

Re: Idrin

Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2014 7:55 am
by Danimal
Looks good to me - nice work!

Re: Idrin

Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2014 7:16 pm
by shift
Funny you should say that Little Yamori. My brother in Japan did the Japanese not me and just 2 days ago he told me that there was a translation error that he was correcting to put out another version of the video. I guess what you spotted is what he was talking about.

Re: Idrin

Posted: Mon Jan 27, 2014 10:44 pm
by Little Yamori
Glad he caught it too. It's minor, but Japanese viewers will notice right away. I hope the commercial for you guys is successful :D