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Stinky and the Lame!
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:58 pm
by figment68
I am new to Anime Studio. I currently have ASP7 and have been teaching myself how to use the program over the last four weeks or so. These little animations are the results so far. I welcome any feedback and or criticisms. Please rate and comment if you would like.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYeLhuch ... sy2qXcaepC
Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:44 pm
by neeters_guy
Not bad for 4 weeks. Pleasant drawing style and good use of particles for the confusion effects. But the stories are kinda boring, though...jk
A commom problem in beginners work is "floatiness". See my comments to Conner_36 along similar lines:
My First Animated Video
Good start. Keep it up.
Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:50 pm
by figment68
neeters_guy wrote:Not bad for 4 weeks. Pleasant drawing style and good use of particles for the confusion effects. But the stories are kinda boring, though...jk
A commom problem in beginners work is "floatiness". See my comments to Conner_36 along similar lines:
My First Animated Video
Good start. Keep it up.
Thanks for watching, and thank you for the helpful criticism.
Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2012 1:54 pm
by slowtiger
Definitely good style, and at least enough movement. And good rigging so far.
Neeters alrady said it: get rid of the floatiness, get some good story, and I'd add: use a faster pace with more dynamic.