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Hey Guys,

I recently completed my first Anime Studio project and thought I would share it here. This is the first episode in what I hope will become a new series. The video does contain some profanity, just giving a heads up.

After a playground incident that puts his job in jeopardy, Mr. Binek, with the help of his friend Zach, team up to teach a third grade class on the dangers of smoking.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ElgzAVgMbk

Good animation and a funny premise and story.

Even with the warning, the cursing ruins it for me. Not one joke requires the cursing, it feels thrown in for no reason at all and seems espeically out of place in a teacher/student scene.

It's clear you can write comedy and animate your ideas well. It'd be nice to see you just make a piece that revolves around the solid jokes that are in there rather than gratuitous cursing. Could be a killer series.

Obviously it's your series and you're free to do as you wish.