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Here is a video I made as a funny cereal commercial for a video game character.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tQi4th6GBUs

I appreciate any encouragement and constructive criticism.

You have really captured the over the top kids' commercial in a funny way. :D And I like it when he puts the helmet on the kid. My only suggestion is to condense it more. From about 46 seconds - 1:16 it feels like it drags. Overall, it's got a great pace and is very fun! :)

Great stuff! Very funny, great voices and writing!

It does seem to get a bit long though. Consider making it into two commercials, as all of it is funny.

I have this fight all of the time, not wanting to cut anything, but trying to keep it short... It's a tough thing to master.

Looks like you are a fan of nintendo games just like me
Good work, nice voice acting.

I enjoyed that. I thought the acting was great. I also like your style of animation.

Thanks for the responses everybody. I appreciate your feedback that it is too long. Your probably right. I probably could have done without the part where he goes a minute explaining what is in the cereal.