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Some toast

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:00 am
by slowtiger
In the meantime I did some simple icon animation, just as a test for style and colours.

http://www.enigmation.de/toast.html

Image

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:39 am
by Víctor Paredes
I really like it, it's simple and funny.

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 9:53 pm
by neeters_guy
That is one well-trained toast! :)

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 7:12 pm
by Gnaws
Nice! Did you draw everything in ASP?

Only one crit; where's the back wall?

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:41 pm
by slowtiger
Of course, every stroke done in AS. You can't see it in this size, but the strokes are completely separated from the shape of the toaster.

I just used AS because I knew about its freeform drawing abilities. I have a job upcoming which requires that I draw in similar style in Illustrator, then save as SVG. It would be nice if SVG would be added as export format for AS some day.

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 11:56 pm
by Víctor Paredes
Hi Slow, maybe you could add it a simulated 3d rotation to the toast. I think that would be cool.

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 12:28 am
by Gnaws
slowtiger wrote:Of course, every stroke done in AS.
Of course.

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 7:11 am
by Genete
To make it perfect you can add the toast's shadow on the table ;)
-G

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:02 am
by DK
The crosshatching on the tablecloth is uneven.

D.K

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 10:55 am
by slowtiger
On the contrary: it is not uneven enough!

Please, this was just a test, and I don't intend to make this into a movie. If I was to, I'd need to rework all parts. I'm not really good in this style which seems to come naturally to some other artists, like the sample Gnaws gave here: viewtopic.php?t=15289

What I would do, though:
- add textures where necessary
- don't use gradients, instead stack uniformly coloured items so they give a similar impression
- separate outlines and coloured shapes even more (think "101 Dalmatians", http://images2.fanpop.com/images/photos ... 84-588.jpg - note the BG! http://www.cartoonbrew.com/wp-content/u ... oreb_b.jpg)
- definitely not do any enforced 3D rotations, except where the story needs them
- don't do any realistic shadows.

Posted: Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:07 am
by DK
Maybe you should make the window and window sil bent as well to suit the tablecloth???

D.K

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 4:10 am
by Acochran_89
i think this would make be cool as an animated avatar lol