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Good for You (Bear and Rabbit comedy short - 45 sec.)

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:48 pm
by lumarama
Here is my short (very tiny but completed). Just in case if someone doesn't know russian ( :) ) here is the translation:

Bear: Rabbit, does your shit ever stuck to your fur?
Rabbit: Nope.
Bear: Good for you...

And here is the short:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w4-RLwKGHFo

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:03 pm
by Danimal
Cool animation.

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:36 pm
by lumarama
Thanks, any suggestions? weak sides?

Posted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 10:25 pm
by Joppa
hehe, cool. i like the scene and the characters. realy nice. :-)

Maybe a sideangel on the rabbit when he jumps in. and the dialog is a bit low.

do you have more animations?

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:29 am
by lumarama
what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:36 pm
by J. Baker
That was hilarious! I gave it 5 stars. ;)

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:06 pm
by jahnocli
lumarama wrote:what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?
-- maybe he means "side angle"?

Posted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 4:22 pm
by lumarama
jahnocli wrote:
lumarama wrote:what did you mean by "sideangel on the rabbit"?
-- maybe he means "side angle"?
Yes, indeed- that makes sense - and thanks for advice

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 8:37 am
by rogermate
How about a short feature about the former Circus bear, who when let free still paced back and forth in the same dimensions as his cage. So they shot him.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:02 am
by lumarama
rogermate wrote:How about a short feature about the former Circus bear, who when let free still paced back and forth in the same dimensions as his cage. So they shot him.
I remember there was a guy on the forum who is making cruel series about 3 bears - I guess this would be good scenario for him :))

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 7:24 pm
by neeters_guy
Ha ha, an oldie but goodie. Hey, btw your 3d animation is sharp.

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 10:59 pm
by lumarama
neeters_guy wrote:Ha ha, an oldie but goodie. Hey, btw your 3d animation is sharp.
Thanks, you mean it is old joke in English part of the Internet too? Very interesting I thought it is purely Russian joke. I mean my animation is based on well known Russian joke. Could you give a link to its English version?

Regarding 3d. I like 2d now... it has certain limitations, but I don't think it is very important if you have good story... Unfortunately I don't have very good story yet :)

Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 11:25 pm
by neeters_guy
lumarama wrote:Very interesting I thought it is purely Russian joke. I mean my animation is based on well known Russian joke.
I actually heard this joke from a coworker back in the eighties. He told it really well (you know, with physical comedy), which is why I still remember it today. I wasn't aware of its Russian origins however. I see on the internet that the rabbit represents the workers and the bear is...well, now it has a whole new level of meaning. :roll: