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new animation children's TV program (in the making)
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:28 am
by mnagaha
animation for children's TV program
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWwI2bwWeRU
please comment
still waiting for audio so i just put in the theme from "Nausica of the walley of the wind" to see

Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:52 am
by slowtiger
Quite nice. Maybe you should adjust your slow-ins and outs a bit, movement seems to start a bit too abruptly sometimes. Especially the dew drop in the beginning just starts to move as if it were a car - but in reality it only could move if the leaf gets tilted.
Posted: Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:46 pm
by synthsin75
(You're missing some letters at the first of that link)
Very nice looking. I like the blooming flowers.
The first letter of the name looks like a guy screaming.

Posted: Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:55 am
by Springymajig
I really like all the background stuff, it's quite pretty, nice colours, moves ok (I agree with Slowtiger tho).
But I really don't like the fairy man... the design just doesn't look as appealing or professional as the background and the colour of his suit is really gawdy.
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:16 pm
by mnagaha
thank you all for commenting!
synthsin75
the first letter is "La" the full name is "lahiru madala" "the morning sun"
slowtiger
i know there is a problem with movement, but i cant really figure out how to address that... i think more studies of movement on simple figures is the thing to do. i'm making things up as i go along.
Springymajig
the color of the figure is a bit brilliant, if i have soft colors they will get flattened out when they go through our old transmitters.
thanks all for comenting !
