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Posted: **Fri May 02, 2008 1:23 am**

Been working on this little short:

Guy & Girl

I'll be updating this post with clips as I upload newer versions:

xxx

CLIP UPDATE:

10/05
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vLio8kbd-6o

07/05
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=myjV0PPJbSE

04/05
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WYN5Lizo5W4

01/05
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=42HiHEUZzWI

xxx

Synopsis:

Guy loves Girl. He is always trying to impress her. Ninja always gets in the way.

I thought of the idea, a girl I met online wrote the script. Still quite a lot of work to do on the animation/camera. Not sure if its working or not. Anyways...

Posted: **Fri May 02, 2008 3:07 pm**

Hah... wow. I love the concept, ninjas make everything better, if they had ninjas in Pirates of the Caribbean 3 it would have won best picture for sure.

But any way I love your walking and running animations, very fluid and natural looking. And I just love your overall style, I just wish that you could make your videos a higher quality.

But still a very good job.

Posted: **Fri May 02, 2008 3:19 pm**

Very cool. The designs and animation are great. Like DarkM, I love the walk/run cycles.

My suggestion would be to make the colors a little bit darker or richer. They look a bit washed out. Sometimes the blue guy is a bit hard to see against the blue sky.

Heh, maybe you just uploaded a low quality version and I'm wasting my breath

Posted: **Fri May 02, 2008 3:41 pm**

Thanks guys.

I'm glad you like the concept.

Will have a look at getting a richer colour scheme. Thanks

Also I'll definitely be uploading a better quality video once this is finished. I upload small 3GP 12 fps samples because they're much much smaller than a 25 fps medium quality video.

Somehow ninjas or zombies or pirates make things better, I'm not sure why.

m

Posted: **Sun May 04, 2008 6:17 pm**

Put up another clip.

I'll be adding them to the first post I made.

Got a richer colour palette and cleaned one or two things up.

Still got quite a bit of work to do on this.

Posted: **Wed May 07, 2008 9:42 pm**

Hey dudes.

Put up another clip:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=myjV0PPJbSE

no audio I'm afraid. Still gotta get that done, as well as a million other little things.
Amazing how the little things add up.

Anyways, I put up 3G clips so the action's pretty jerky and the fast actions are lost. Also gotta add a whole bunch of names to the credits list, people here who have helped me immensely on progressing in animation.

m

Posted: **Sat May 10, 2008 4:55 pm**

Put up another clip, MUCH better quality.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vLio8kbd-6o

Seeing if YMCK (www.ymck.net) would be interested in putting some music to it. I think that'd be AWESOME and totally cool!