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new version looking much better... i dont envy you working with 'realistic' proportions! good luck as always

Here is a turnaround I made in Photoshop to get the proportions right.

Ok, Had several comments on my design so I went and redid the whole thing, made him somewhat more realistic as well.

I see mine in there

Cant wait to see this animated!

great stuff man... my only comment would be that i think his eye bags are a little too pronounced like the photoshop turnaround!

If you saw the Shaolin documentaries you'd know why the eye bags are so big!

Yeah, it looked better at high rez, maybe a thinner line.

The Photoshop turnaround was hard work, even for scribbles like these, but it helps get things in perspective.

Thanks guys!

Yeah make the eye bags with a thinner/ lighter colored line. I like the character and turn around. Excellent. Looking forward to the animation.

Here's a color turnaround made in ASP, has a few glitches but it is getting there.

Arms look weird. It seems you missed the right arm positions for 3/4. I would remove the arm outline at side poses.
-G

Hello Genete.

Yes, there are quite a few glitches, like the folding of the dress is on the wrong side at some point.

Already fixed some of those, will fix the rest in the morning then post an update.

Thanks for your help!

Another turnaround, and I think I took care of pretty much all glitches, at least to the point where I care.

Also, the file got garbled, had to redo the whole coloring, ASP really needs better and simpler coloring method.

Your character looks great. I can't wait to see the animated version.

Cheers,
Gilbert L. Concepcion
www.guhitgalaw.com